Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Playing with blurbs

So I'm trying to write two blurbs for the same book; one that will hopefully appeal to male readers, one that will appeal to female readers.  Here's what I have so far:

MADISON
I'm Taylor, and I'm just about to start my senior year of high school. I stay in shape, get decent grades and I have some really good friends. What makes me special is my girlfriend, Madison. She's an angel. And I don't just mean that she's really sweet, which she is. She's an actual angel. She can fly, she's super strong and she's nearly invulnerable. How do I feel about Madison? Most of the time I want to tear her clothes off, push her up against a wall and make her scream my name in ecstasy. Sometimes I just want to stare into her eyes. Into her soul. See the world how she sees it. We have this perfect mix of love and sexual chemistry; a relationship for the ages. This is the story of how we met. Of how we fell in love. Of how my life changed forever.

Madison is a supernatural romance filled with tragedy, hope, espionage, sex, heartache and love.

For mature readers.


WHITE OPS
I never thought I'd work for a secret spy agency, drive a Lamborghini Gallardo, blow up bad guys and land the hottest, sexiest piece of ass this side of the Mason/Dixon line. But I did. This is the story of how I fell for an angel and fought a demon. Stormed a castle. Cheated death. I'm Taylor, the most badass high school student that ever lived. F*@# yeah.

For mature readers; contains strong sexual content, violence and adult language.
 
 
Anyway, if any of you readers out there have suggestions, let me know!

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